Comment Reflection

After reviewing and commenting on my peers' blogs I learned that I need to be more careful with my grammar and spelling throughout the paper. To do this I need to read through the paper again before submitting to catch any obvious and simple errors. I also learned I need to check that the headers are on the same page as the content that they go along with after the paper is converted to a word document. Without doing this, the headers are on separate pages from the text that belongs with it or there are large gaps between sections. I also need to be more clear and concise with my sentences to make the paper easier to read while still getting the point across.

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